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DizzasterJuice
18th Sep 2014, 8:20 AM

Today's incentive page is the uncut original of the last frame where Eloma shows a bit more.

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Skweeee
18th Sep 2014, 8:33 AM

"your death will be by my hand"

I love these moments in stories.

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DizzasterJuice
18th Sep 2014, 10:14 PM

Liri is a consistently strong personality, but Eloma, not so much. She has a few weak moments.

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woohooligan
18th Sep 2014, 12:48 PM

You always have to wonder what the villains are thinking when they say these things. "Oh wait, you mean, I'm somehow mind-controlling you into torturing my friend? My god! I'm a monster!" :P

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DizzasterJuice
18th Sep 2014, 10:17 PM

The dogs have been playing head games and good-cop/bad-cop with them since they arrived.

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Dragonrider
18th Sep 2014, 1:32 PM

I would seem Sir Liam needs to hurry a bit if he is to rescue his Lady Love.

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DizzasterJuice
18th Sep 2014, 10:18 PM

She might be okay...
she might be a bit taller though.

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moizmad
18th Sep 2014, 3:36 PM

A bit more you say, gee, I wonder what bit that would be????

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cattservant
18th Sep 2014, 9:59 PM

Lots of dead folks!

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Lopriest
22nd Sep 2014, 3:03 AM

Cool page.

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DizzasterJuice
26th Sep 2014, 10:49 AM

Thanks!

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BongMeesteR
26th Sep 2014, 10:20 AM

Fantastic page as always Dizz. Your storyline and atwork impresses me to no end. Have you read "The Chronicles of Zona"?
Sorry to be pedantic, but it's "iMpatient"

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DizzasterJuice
26th Sep 2014, 10:52 AM

Thank you very much!
I've seen "The Chronicles of Zona" before but never read it.
I always welcome an extra set of eyes for spelling errors - I'll fix it when I get home later.

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