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DizzasterJuice
5th Jan 2015, 10:19 AM

I was attempting to make her skin look a little artificial and plastic, even a little gray in the extremities. I'm not sure if it works or not but my first version was more of a blue tint.

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moizmad
5th Jan 2015, 4:34 PM

I know, my place, nobody will ever look for her there! I'll only charge her 1/4 rent!

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DizzasterJuice
5th Jan 2015, 6:42 PM

Vancouver does sound better then the catacombs but once she finds out that you'll have her cooking and cleaning I think she'll take her chances in the underworld. :P

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Karyl
5th Jan 2015, 5:37 PM

What of the human whose body she is occupying? is she wiped out and replaced or are they now sharing that body? Which in turn has been altered--just how much??

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DizzasterJuice
5th Jan 2015, 6:45 PM

Those answers coming sometime soon in this chapter.

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DragonMageRyanM
5th Jan 2015, 6:11 PM

Well done on having the 19th & 20th spots for The Crease and Whiteout!

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DizzasterJuice
5th Jan 2015, 6:51 PM

Thanks. The Crease was in the top 25 last month so hopefully it can stay up there again. It would be nice if WhiteOut stays up there too but it usually drops off.
All the credit goes to you readers though. Thank you all very much.

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jamie59
5th Jan 2015, 9:54 PM

Is that some sort of external memory agumentation?

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DizzasterJuice
6th Jan 2015, 9:38 AM

It gets somewhat explained on the next page.

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MaiLyng
6th Jan 2015, 2:35 AM

Creepy girl just got creepier.

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DizzasterJuice
6th Jan 2015, 9:39 AM

I wanted her to be creepy/cute, if that makes sense.

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xpacetrue
6th Jan 2015, 10:27 AM

I understand why you'd want to Borg-ify her somewhat. Though, I don't get why her skin should be plastic. IMO, her face resembles an android. Or like she had the skin on her face replaced.

But then, I'm probably biased. I often prefer subtle. And now I'm wondering what your first version looked like. :)

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DizzasterJuice
6th Jan 2015, 11:49 AM

Her skin is not plastic, I just said I wanted it to look a little glossy like plastic and a little dead-ish in the extremities, like the blood circulation was temporarily disrupted. It will start looking more like real skin once the blood starts flowing again.

Her face, skin, and implants get explained on the next page.

The first version was more blue, like Star Trek Data color, but it looked too dead. I didn't want her looking like Mailyng up there. (no offense Mai) heheh

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SquallLion
6th Jan 2015, 3:58 PM

a new life

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DizzasterJuice
6th Jan 2015, 11:25 PM

A new life for a new life form!

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Coolhand77
6th Jan 2015, 11:00 PM

If the borg queen had looked like that, she'd have had an easier time assimilating humans ;)

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DizzasterJuice
6th Jan 2015, 11:26 PM

Yeah they could have picked a better looking actress for the borg queen but the disassembled borg queen sequence was pretty cool with the spine and all.

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Dongaria
7th Jan 2015, 1:19 AM

This page rules. I love the way you made her face look vaguely puppet like to suggest her origins.

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DizzasterJuice
7th Jan 2015, 8:17 PM

Thanks. Her textures were a lot harder to make than they look but it was worth it the extra effort I think.

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Vulnerable

HiFranc
19th Aug 2015, 4:43 PM

Now that Tyranos's Diagnostic and Repair Program is no longer in his body, he cannot fix himself after attack. His only hope is that the engineer (I forget her name) will maintain him. That means he's vulnerable to attack if she refuses to help and/or cannot help him in time.

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