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DizzasterJuice
5th Feb 2015, 10:33 AM

I uploaded the second render of the series for Lennare and Carrencia. You'll find it in the TWC vote button as usual.

I had to re-load this page due to technical difficulties my own stupidity.

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IllustratorMan
5th Feb 2015, 11:38 AM

Wow. Impressive work!

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DizzasterJuice
5th Feb 2015, 6:55 PM

Thank you very much!

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Skweeee
5th Feb 2015, 1:42 PM

I like that there is a lot that happened on this page.

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DizzasterJuice
5th Feb 2015, 6:58 PM

I wasn't sure if I got that lifting he skirt with her foot sequence captured right though. Still not sure but I guess you can tell what's going on with it.

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Dongaria
5th Feb 2015, 1:45 PM

That armor is the sexiest.

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DizzasterJuice
5th Feb 2015, 7:05 PM

I'm not sure if I'd call any of it armor. There's not much of it there to protect them.

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moizmad
5th Feb 2015, 5:31 PM

Wow that Carrencia has a lot of nerve!
If she did that to me, I'd jump her right then and there.

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DizzasterJuice
5th Feb 2015, 7:08 PM

I'd jump any one (or all three) just for looking at me. lol
Actually, Lennare is the blonde and Carrencia is the brunette. Mirrame assumed incorrectly when they first met.

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Someone
6th Feb 2015, 1:32 AM

Lennare is giving me Bronn (Tyrion's merc in Game of Thrones) vibes so I like her already XD
I find the movements of her tail rather hilarious too, but I like Carrencia better, possibly because she looks more like an attractive human instead of a pretty half-alien, you know, Uncanny valley and all that.

Just one small criticism, unless this bar is supposed to be high class or something, which is unlikely in a seemingly small town, I doubt they would have paitings in the walls, too expensive for such a place, and quite likely to get stained or broken. Plus it gives a very human vibe, human looking warship, human looking clothes, and so far we haven't seen much of a navy among these people.

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DizzasterJuice
6th Feb 2015, 12:18 PM

I like the character Bronn too. I don't know what poor little Tyrion will do without him. Maybe they'll meet up once he gets out of there.

This is the town's high class tavern frequented by wealthy trade merchants. There's a smaller pub in the docks district for the working class sailors and the like.

The reason that you haven't seen much of the navy yet is that they were all south, out of the path of the storm while Liam was in Dhaka. The Minkies do have number of ships talked about in Chapter 3. The lateen rigged war galley in the painting is exactly what the Minkies sail and they make their appearance later in the story. They also have a sizable fleet of smaller Xebecs. Whisker boats are the primary trade ship for trade between Sarola, Dhaka and the Southern Atoll islands.

Humans played a large part in their history so they frequently appear in their artwork. The human clothing was talked about in a previous chapter, The Royal Wedding.

At this point in the story it gets very political and the importance of Port Leamarone comes in to play. The Minkies have a very complex trade system so what I'll do is make a special page this weekend showing the complete atoll and all the trade routes.

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MaiLyng
6th Feb 2015, 12:45 PM

How long have these two been with the Countess? Where does their loyalty lie, with Stollo or the Countess? Now that the other king is dead it does sound like its getting political.

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