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DizzasterJuice
9th May 2016, 8:23 AM

I added a new "thank you" page to the TWC vote button.

My favorite sci-fi webcomic of the week is Aidana. Check it out and leave a comment or two.

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moizmad
9th May 2016, 3:33 PM

That eees one tidy looking sewer, wish my apt was that nice!

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DizzasterJuice
10th May 2016, 11:56 AM

It was actually the water supply for the city of Keang before the humans came along and made the city of Dalai who used it as a sewer.

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Steven-Vincent
9th May 2016, 4:34 PM

Love the establishing shot in panel 1. Very nicely done. You are still the lighting master.

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DizzasterJuice
10th May 2016, 11:54 AM

Thanks. The lighting in the first four panels are intended to be grungy and dirty looking as they are supposed to reflect Yoakai's emotions -- Her father just died and possibly some postpartum depression and a bit of guilt. Other than the color in her new aijin who replaced Yumiko, I used more ambient light and less direct light to dimly light the scene.

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Malcadon
10th May 2016, 2:03 AM

Ouch! I snapped my neck with that dutch angle! ;p

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DizzasterJuice
10th May 2016, 12:03 PM

Dutch angle is supposed portray psychological uneasiness or tension. I think there's some tension brewing here. Lucy you got a lot of 'splaining to do!

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Malcadon
11th May 2016, 5:28 AM

I know... It was a joke.

I only said that as the sudden angle change caught me off guard.

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