Chapter 17

Chapter 17




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Dragonrider
17th Oct 2016, 1:11 PM

Is this two separate entities, or representation of two personalities speaking with each other while inhabiting the same body?

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DizzasterJuice
17th Oct 2016, 1:54 PM

The one on the left is Crystyn Weiss, navigator from the Demetrius. On the right is Essential, Tyranos' sentient repair program. Essential loaded herself into Crystyns body in chapter 11 and at the moment they are in a simulation program that they run together.

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Steve O
17th Oct 2016, 2:25 PM

Somehow I don't think Essential wants to try it out with Hochi.

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DizzasterJuice
17th Oct 2016, 7:28 PM

She actually hinted at it earlier in the story.

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Steve O
19th Oct 2016, 3:12 PM

The little minx wants a 3 way with Carri Liam doesn't she?

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jamie59
17th Oct 2016, 8:44 PM

No! Um maybe. Who you want to hump?
Why do I think Essential won't have much trouble talking her into it?

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DizzasterJuice
19th Oct 2016, 3:48 PM

Probably everyone.

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Skweeee
17th Oct 2016, 11:24 PM

I love the 'views' on this page. Of the planet.

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DizzasterJuice
19th Oct 2016, 3:46 PM

Thanks. I probably don't use establishing shots nearly as often as I should but I'm learning.

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xpacetrue
19th Oct 2016, 10:44 PM

Technically, Essential would not need to involve another person to partially experience human sexuality. She could try a "solo voyage" first. Ms. Weiss could take the reigns. Essential is completely inexperienced, anyway, and she can see and feel everything Crystyn's body experiences.

Crystyn could say no on grounds of embarrassment or personal belief. (Or how this is the wrong place and time.) But they do have to share a body. They're stuck together for the rest of their life. It's probably going to happen sooner or later, anyway. For that matter, Ms. Weiss ought to feel relieved that Essential wants to build trust and how she asked for permission.

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