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DizzasterJuice
28th Nov 2016, 3:03 PM

Sorry, I went out of town last week and forgot to set up pages to upload before I left.

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Garthvader76
28th Nov 2016, 8:08 PM

I really like this.

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DizzasterJuice
30th Nov 2016, 4:18 PM

Thank you

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Dragonrider
28th Nov 2016, 9:58 PM

Might one say, The Cat's out, or soon will be, of the bag?

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DizzasterJuice
30th Nov 2016, 4:19 PM

It could be... or I can just let it draw out another few chapters. lol

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Steven-Vincent
29th Nov 2016, 8:31 AM

I like how the internal dialogue is done between panels 4-5 with the internal cross-talk.

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DizzasterJuice
30th Nov 2016, 4:24 PM

It makes it easier (I think) to understand that there are two people talking here. Also using two different fonts.

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Steve O
29th Nov 2016, 12:59 PM

I'm glad you posted it, there's a lot going on in this episode.

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DizzasterJuice
30th Nov 2016, 4:30 PM

Sometimes I jump around too much but there's a lot going on in many different places so it's hard not to.

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Tookye
29th Nov 2016, 5:27 PM

"Bar Keep! Round of Karma for All!"

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DizzasterJuice
30th Nov 2016, 4:34 PM

"Don't mess with karma"
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Steve O
30th Nov 2016, 12:56 PM

I wonder if Noemi is still going to refer to Tyranos as "Psycotron" now that she's taken a ride in the mind ripper?

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DizzasterJuice
30th Nov 2016, 4:36 PM

She might start watching robo-porn with him now.

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plot

Jan
30th Nov 2016, 1:27 PM

wonderful update and nice to see more of the plot thanks

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DizzasterJuice
30th Nov 2016, 4:39 PM

Thank you very much Jan.

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